sábado, 2 de marzo de 2019

MY DREAMS AND FEARS

My dreams

Everyone wants to be successful and rich. I also dream of becoming successful in the field I choose although I am still indecisive about the career path I will choose. But I know whatever I choose I will work hard, stay focused and make it big.
I also dream of doing something for my country. There are so many problems in the country such as poverty, illiteracy and casteism to name a few. Our country was once known for its rich cultural heritage which is all robbed now. The crime rate in the country is at an all time rise and so are various other issues. While there are a lot of loopholes in the India political system that has led to these problems however we cannot blame it all on the government. Each one of us should contribute our bit towards our country’s development.
I want to be an air force officer, to make a difference and solve problems in my country. I dream of eradicating poverty and social inequality from our country and will do my best in this direction. If we all join hands we shall certainly be able to free our country from these evils.

My fears

My fear are associate with the loss of beings that i appreciate too much, if i can´t do something for them or help them.

Also that i can´t fulfill my life project, if i don´t achieve my purposes for this year, which are the ICFES, i suppose i can´t do the rest of the goals.

1 comentario:

  1. Good job Yeison. However, there was missing information in the text. For example, how you will face the problems, how you will know you achieve your goals and the use of second conditional.
    Score: 3.5

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